Saturday, July 16, 2011

While I was falling

As I was thought
I could never be emptiness

the wind
momentarily
floats a leaf
as it falls I turn
and look up at the sky


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4 comments:

Jyoti Mishra said...

Loved the imagery :)

erin said...

i'm not sure what it is inside of this tiny poem but it is essential being somehow. beautiful, rivercat.

xo
erin

Angel said...

A thought provoking piece ,keep on rereading it still i wasn't able to gauge the writer.

Madhulika said...

Loved the way you ended it...