We
s t r e t c h
across heaven
across heaven
painting the sky with our light
a wondrous display
sprinkling hope through the night
sprinkling hope through the night
And
carrying her planets
carrying her planets
shines the Sun with our heart
bringing ever so gently
each day a new start
...
16 comments:
I love this <3
Yes, and each day also it brings new hope.Nice post!
This is beautiful.
Inspiring post.
This is beautiful. :) I love how you're playing with format too now. Thanks for your comments! I just got back from the UK so I'll be posting soon. Don't worry, I won't abandon my readers <3
I missed your posts as I was disconnected from web :(
Fantastic again.
Loved it.
<3 rhyming even! you are a master. :)
thanks roseanna2u, Angel, Eva, & PBB :)
Hi Dreamer and Jyoti glad youre are back <3
Hi Whatever, ha, i love when I chance upon a poetry google snippet or explanation of all the forms of poetry. I just barely know a sonnet is 14 lines ( i just googled to make sure!) but i wrote one here once and it was 13 lines and when i found out it wassupposed to be 14 I changed the title to "13 line sonnet" and kind of made believe i knew what i was doing. A rhyme does seem to slip out now and then though. thnx <3
I love you.
LOVE!
This is just beautiful. One of my favourites of yours, I think (-:
Such a warm feeling you transmit.
loved the sun's message... a bright new start after a dark night, I hope people can understand it.. they need to
it is both your poetry
and what rests just behind it silently
in shadow with sinewy join
that makes reading you special.
xo
erin
wow tywo, I am ovewhelmed and at a loss for words at such a sweet comment! Thanks! <3
hi borderlineLil, I think I changed this one 20 times but sadly that is not the record. Thnx for such a nice comment:)
hi Anna, thanks :)
hi Beyond, thnx, it seems to be a hlpfulway to look at things esp when feeling down
hi erin, wow, thank you. xo
Where do you get this inspiration, your lines are so poetic and lovely......another great piece.
hi marie,thanks! I guess I enjoy being surprised by the process of writing..m:)
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