Is the old way out?
in this way only is
romance about
the way I love you
I can sense you in the area
on a sign outside where
the gates to the ocean open
lay the earth behind my blinds
A wedding bell chimes
the lull to be kept in
pursuing a hope without gradually
caring whatever that means
growing within love
in the beginning
dreaming there is no left there
Squeezed by her legs
and pressed into the sun
a place a home
the earth behind
my blinds
opening the floodgates of an ocean.
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11 comments:
imho, this is one of your very best RC.
Beautiful!
just the right touch of risque...
thnx Linda, i tried something different here and wrote something after reading some of the blogs.
the best part is ididnt change much!
inspired by this poem
I like this too, and that blog is really good. <3
I didn't see this last night.
It is perfect.
You are a great writer!
excellent! I see growth here!
thnx roseanna, i agree and your site is great too! <3
hi whatever, although i dont have much confidence in my writing, i appreciate nice comments like that and am happy when you like what i write. Your writings fill me with wonder and I love them all. I wish I could express better how they make me feel. <3
HiPBB, thnx ,both your blogs are amazing and I always look forward to reading them and attempting to make a sensible response comment! <3
ajhfak.
yes.
god.
i love this.
so, so much.
am speechless. <3
I keep getting hung up on the "squeezed by her legs" part. I'm blushing but don't know if i should be?
hi juniper, thnx so much for the nice comment. Youre a goddess of words, thoughts, and formatting text and always inspire me! <3
Hi zoned, yes and no, the sun rays are her legs too, and I got that from a legend about capturing the sun so it would be more accommodating. Althought the florida sun is kind of malignant, i still love it, even though I dont go to the beach as much as I used to. All that said, It is as much about both kinds of warmth as one and not just individually ( if that makes any sense)
sun snare "legs of the sun" polynesian legend
I think youd like this if you havent read it ... I remember a long time ago post on creation from your blog, and I liked that because I didnt know much about taht one <3
A difficult one this one.
I sense the real climax here
'pursuing a hope without gradually
caring whatever that means
growing within love
in the beginning
dreaming there is no left there '
dreaming there is no left there...this is ambitious.
thanks for the interesting information
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