Most poems have burrs
some that fall off and
stick to us
some poems have burrs
like stellate stars
that penetrate the heart
and warm the liver
and some have burrs
that are scary or cold
and kind of make you shiver
this poem has a burr too
I'm totally in Love with You
and I really am... it's true.
I hope that doesn't
give you the flu.
.
7 comments:
Now we got the chills!;~)
I wouldn't mind gertting the flu, as long as it really was from you <3
A pretty chilly poem. nevertheless, message sent!
You rock at this Rivercat!
thnx for the comments. Im trying to decide whether or not to take my netbook on my trip.
Maybe I need a break, but you know how addicting writing can be. I'm going to miss my blog and cyber friends :(
an unexpected ending.
love the idea that most poems have burrs. think all poems should. this one certainly does.
xo
erin
OK, What the HELL does this poem mean?? I mean the ending doesn't make sense at all!
hi erin, thanks, youre poems are amazing :)
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