Saturday, May 21, 2011

The still soft universe

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Their souls burn night bright
moving with time's
pauses and still lightness
like the man, woman, or child
rapt in sunshine, music, or air
in each found the other
listening to love


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8 comments:

Whatever said...

I can hear a lot of Love right here. :)

May 22, 2011 at 5:18 AM
roseanna2u said...

This is sweet. I love that feeling. <3

May 22, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Psycho Babbling Basher said...

I love listening to love.

May 22, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Precy Larkins said...

I love the imagery in your first line. =)

May 22, 2011 at 1:34 PM
Keda said...

moving with time's pauses.... nicely done.

May 23, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Anonymous said...

I woke up to these words. Now, can you imagine how beautiful my day will be?
Oh, I love your blog!



LOVE!

May 23, 2011 at 7:27 AM
saraht said...

Lovely imagery. xo

May 23, 2011 at 9:14 AM
Anonymous said...

thanks for all the nice comments!

-rivercat :)

May 26, 2011 at 4:24 AM

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