A forest silhouette
vanishes
as the last powdery cloud
sneaks through the closing
curtain of night
with mountains
all gone
all shifted beneath the
golden eye of the fire
we dream simply
to ourselves
Inseparable
from the earth
underneath leaves
and the light in air
traveling the sky
.
.
15 comments:
This is my new favorite!
This is wonderful. Welcome back. xo
Lovely!
beautiful. always. :)
Oh I love this, beautiful! ❤
I love this. It makes me feel at peace. <3
Lovely poem, brought peace to my mind. Great one!
Gorgeous imagery Rivercat, esp love the "powdery cloud". Nice work x
What provoked the fire I wonder...
so much to think and wonder about with this poem: writting inspires peace through rythm and words, but the fire and the forest dissapearing says that perhaps there is no peace, but then again 'we dream simply'... love it.
Thanks all for the comments. This was inspired by a two day camping trip in virginia with one night in the woods. I hadn't done anything like that since I was in my teens so it was fun but still a tiny bit spooky :)
Simply beautiful.
You know we have copperheads here... but it sounds like a very lovely and peaceful experience that you had:~)
This gave me peace. Breaks are so nourishing!
Thanks Cazham, you have a really nice writing on you blog,* calmabiding) and great photos to go with the words too:)
HI zoned, Yes, the weather was better than usual for my stay. That helped a lot :)
Thands the Blog Writer, yes, everyone needs a break now and then :)
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