.three
the color of long romantic moments
drawn in
saturated by your you
.four
I can hear the wind and flowers
as your song vibrates
growing slowly
wordlessly
within me
three
mending me nurturing me
transforming shadows
into music
.four
I collapse between
sensibilities* our continents
close in on together
.
*hues
7 comments:
"...as your song vibrates
growing slowly
wordlessly
within me"
This part, I thought was amazing!
I love this whole thing,especially the "saturated by your you" part. It reminded me my photoshop class and playing with saturation and hue. <3
This is wonderful.
xo
I LOVE "our continents close in on together". Terrific writing R xx
Ah, thumbs up!
thanks blog,roseanna,sarah,and Lil for stopping in and commenting :)
PBB, it must have been strange watching the take over.
I was wondering if it was a case of some kind of cyberalien mind abduction
wow, I came across your site and this is a wonderful piece of write. I loved reading your poems. I commented here because this was one of my favorites but I enjoyed all the pieces I read.
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