Monday, June 6, 2011

I Can Hear The Wind And Flowers

the color of  long romantic moments
drawn in
saturated by your you
I can hear the wind and flowers
as your song vibrates
growing slowly
within me
mending me nurturing me
transforming shadows
into music
I collapse between
sensibilities*  our continents
close in on together



The Blog Writer said...

" your song vibrates
growing slowly
within me"

This part, I thought was amazing!

roseanna2u said...

I love this whole thing,especially the "saturated by your you" part. It reminded me my photoshop class and playing with saturation and hue. <3

saraht said...

This is wonderful.

Borderline Lil said...

I LOVE "our continents close in on together". Terrific writing R xx

Psycho Babbling Basher said...

Ah, thumbs up!

rivercat said...

thanks blog,roseanna,sarah,and Lil for stopping in and commenting :)

PBB, it must have been strange watching the take over.
I was wondering if it was a case of some kind of cyberalien mind abduction

TracyRobin said...

wow, I came across your site and this is a wonderful piece of write. I loved reading your poems. I commented here because this was one of my favorites but I enjoyed all the pieces I read.