tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post5203622210152193251..comments2023-12-17T08:44:19.553-05:00Comments on Crying With A Sense Of Human: The dark eyes of a shadowrivercathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-4610107573289952852011-04-03T02:59:10.565-04:002011-04-03T02:59:10.565-04:00The dark eyes of shadow..the title is just so apt ...The dark eyes of shadow..the title is just so apt for your poem..it will be in my memory for a very longtime...repeating itself on and on<br /><br />Came by your blog a bit late..but hopefully didn't miss your superb writings :)Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-37439061143692904572011-04-01T09:31:05.428-04:002011-04-01T09:31:05.428-04:00nicole, thanks , On multi talent- you've never...nicole, thanks , On multi talent- you've never seen me bowl :p<br /><br />hi trickie, thats a very nice compliment , wow thank you. Im still learning how to write.<br />I like how you put yourself into the stories (( I mean your persona here and there in the characters) and I told you already I feel a need to be able to put sensuality in my poems if i want to without seeming unauthentic, and I think reading your blog is slowly helping me :)<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://patricia-abrazosybesos.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Trickie's short story blog</a><br /><br /><3rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-62410332323268576682011-04-01T06:37:29.481-04:002011-04-01T06:37:29.481-04:00"Symmetry to silence" Yes there is. Lik..."Symmetry to silence" Yes there is. Like an equilibrium, a balance. <br />I almost missed this post.<br />I love reading your poetry, it inspires my days.<br />Thank you Rivercat.Trickiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00580501709765812806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-32992132952335100762011-03-31T02:47:49.929-04:002011-03-31T02:47:49.929-04:00This has a lot of depth. I loved it from the begin...This has a lot of depth. I loved it from the beginning. Those first four lines are so engaging and then it ends so beautifully mysterious. Really enjoyed this!! I just read above that you also made the picture. Oh my goodness it is wonderful. You are so multi-talented! Great job!✗✗https://www.blogger.com/profile/15322140048379475542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-89022266643654353262011-03-31T01:30:35.083-04:002011-03-31T01:30:35.083-04:00I dont think it is others or me really kowing what...I dont think it is others or me really kowing what is or isnt going on. I find that not knowing for certain in general about things allows for more understanding and definitely for me less stress.<br />That said I will give you the genera sense i was thinking about as I remeber it. If it takes on some new meaning forme im fin with that but this is loosely what was going on when i wrote it a couple days ago ithink... <br />Ok,the firt stanza is about setting the tone about thinking, the dualities at play,from sub atomic particles charges ( +,-), to wondering whether or not someone loves you.<br />The second is about trying to be inclusive and the self, and how a poem can be about a lot of things and one thing at the same time<br />the third is about subjectivity and the idea objective reality, and a more defined narrative in the context of the picture I made for the poem.<br />The last one is open to interpretation depening on how you read it but generally could be about self reflection, thinking about someone you love,or trying to see the good in yourself and others in difficult and emotionally charged situations. <br />Thanks for visiting and commenting :)rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-47107981675078218142011-03-30T21:57:45.426-04:002011-03-30T21:57:45.426-04:00Rivercat, hi there,
I don't know what's t...Rivercat, hi there, <br />I don't know what's the matter with me except that I am far too literal stuck in the black and white. So, I have to ask about what others seem to already know. I get a feeling, a sense, but can't know what you mean here. All I can say is I really like you and what you have to say. Ha. How brilliant am I.<br />Thinking of you and wondering what you are thinking.<br />LindaRubye Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02511953177053448513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-65738580521571949312011-03-30T16:55:34.950-04:002011-03-30T16:55:34.950-04:00Akeith , thanks for stopping by to comment :)
Anna...Akeith , thanks for stopping by to comment :)<br />Anna Sergi , always a pleasure, thanks <br />saraht, I appreciate the kind words :) <br />Psycho Babbling Basher , hi PBB, Thanks for the nice comment :)<br />The Dreamer, glad to see you stop in :)<br />roseanna2u, my pleasure and thanks :) <br />Simran, thanks, your time poem was wonderful. Thanks for the nice comment :)<br />Whatever, I always feel especially soothed by your soulful words :)<br />Anonymous, I think we are all aliens to others somewhere, so yes :)<br />dead-girl, thanks for such a nice comment, yes I agree with you :)<br />mhairi!, Thanks for commenting, your site really caught my eye and heart,your words are inpiring, they seem both ethereal and concrete somehow :) <br />lvroftiques, hi vanna, thanks for stopping in. I still cant get that picture of your dog our of my mind!rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-55485705949599048312011-03-30T16:38:14.980-04:002011-03-30T16:38:14.980-04:00It's delish RC! VannaIt's delish RC! Vannalvroftiqueshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13817625061049340265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-23119149710178337832011-03-30T13:18:50.283-04:002011-03-30T13:18:50.283-04:00Why is it only now the time should pass enough for...Why is it only now the time should pass enough for us to find each other's blogs?<br /><br />Compelling in simplicity, delicious by secrecy, crux divine and somehow passive in knowledge.<br /><br />You've captured me and I can't wait to read more Xmhairi!https://www.blogger.com/profile/14767237483351504064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-21026057243067988812011-03-30T13:06:14.691-04:002011-03-30T13:06:14.691-04:00this is what brings it together for me:
A reflec...this is what brings it together for me:<br /><br /><br />A reflection looks<br /> through glass<br /> past what<br /> we know<br /><br />great writing your spirit is in it :)dead-girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16016374169786148983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-73459140001756670632011-03-30T11:40:54.732-04:002011-03-30T11:40:54.732-04:00is this about aliens?is this about aliens?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-72084324135238374672011-03-30T10:00:52.037-04:002011-03-30T10:00:52.037-04:00Alive, I try not to think so much,
but to feel.
No...Alive, I try not to think so much,<br />but to feel.<br />Not to know the future or the past,<br />but clear the way for the light, the electricity and magnetics of heart and soul. where sometimes even eyes are deep enough to drown in.Whateverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12029339185856158199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-31887132285067646952011-03-30T08:11:54.252-04:002011-03-30T08:11:54.252-04:00To find a glow
in the dark eyes
of a shadow.
Sh...To find a glow<br /> in the dark eyes<br /> of a shadow.<br /><br />Shows your excitement :)<br />Beautifully Composed ..Simranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01931908983809822868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-1026388203799135552011-03-30T07:01:44.731-04:002011-03-30T07:01:44.731-04:00I love this, and thanks for the comment on my poem...I love this, and thanks for the comment on my poem. Yours give me goosebumps. <3roseanna2uhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12383408623234601664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-80726704127204643852011-03-30T06:51:20.053-04:002011-03-30T06:51:20.053-04:00;D;DThe Dreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15939036986139021611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-84855507181637405222011-03-30T06:17:05.200-04:002011-03-30T06:17:05.200-04:00"To find a glow
in the dark eyes
of a shado..."To find a glow<br /> in the dark eyes<br /> of a shadow."<br />I find this utterly romantic.Psycho Babbling Basherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17232755958213827818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-47127983654823723022011-03-30T04:33:58.125-04:002011-03-30T04:33:58.125-04:00Authentic and thoughtfully approached. Wonderful!Authentic and thoughtfully approached. Wonderful!sarahthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16431733227735205203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-3466421841470047462011-03-30T03:47:09.638-04:002011-03-30T03:47:09.638-04:00I love the quirky dance, private romance of our me...I love the quirky dance, private romance of our memory *_*AnnaFullStophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06877463150680401243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-55101678521742873902011-03-30T02:04:42.921-04:002011-03-30T02:04:42.921-04:00What a curious poem. Nice read.What a curious poem. Nice read.Akeith Waltershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07901655384498253421noreply@blogger.com