tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post153982435103026838..comments2023-12-17T08:44:19.553-05:00Comments on Crying With A Sense Of Human: We Saw The Sun Break Through The Skyrivercathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-275822941281514772011-04-19T10:09:51.196-04:002011-04-19T10:09:51.196-04:00thnx for those who care, this one was a struggle t...thnx for those who care, this one was a struggle to write so I appreciate your comments. I came so close to deleting it but Im glad to see a few people that liked it . :)rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-91771940738373834672011-04-19T06:44:45.103-04:002011-04-19T06:44:45.103-04:00there is knot that binds those who believe in love...there is knot that binds those who believe in love. this knot is nothing but trust , faith and confidence that you can rise when you are lying in debri. beautiful write up!A grain of sandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17686452035701387053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-52829773356469082412011-04-12T08:21:01.232-04:002011-04-12T08:21:01.232-04:00Anna, thnx, it seems they fly apart without
junip...Anna, thnx, it seems they fly apart without<br /><br />juniper, thnx, i think i overdid this one with 25 edits or so but it was a learning experience for sure. the rhyming im still trying to understand. it doesnt feel perfectly right on my "through me" post (2nd stanza), but i wonder if the syllable stress rhymers ever do. Luckily i didnt haveto go on a synonym safari :)rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-72673349895423589942011-04-12T02:30:18.085-04:002011-04-12T02:30:18.085-04:00HJFAASBJBASF!!
rivercatttttttt, i can't do rh...HJFAASBJBASF!!<br /><br />rivercatttttttt, i can't do rhymes either. it's why i write in blank verse most of the time. if i try to rhyme the words just end up sounding forced and a thousand miles from where i need them to be because i've had to use a synonym to fit the rhyme scheme. :/<br /><br />ALSOOOO, i love these edits! i really really really admire writers who can go back and re-do and continuously edit their work. for me i just write and then just kind of...leave it. i never have the heart to come back and change it. so, basically, i am LOVING THIS NOW.<br /><br /><3juniperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15086932207768017104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-65374962964451785912011-04-11T16:51:47.840-04:002011-04-11T16:51:47.840-04:00We knew without light
we could not live, but we al...We knew without light<br />we could not live, but we also<br />knew we had to trust the dark<br />So we moved below<br /> the skin's unimportance<br />and trusted our seeing<br />to the dragon's eye<br /><br />This is all I want in a relationship.AnnaFullStophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06877463150680401243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-78997187107627227442011-04-11T16:20:32.405-04:002011-04-11T16:20:32.405-04:00they are red, black, dark brown and red and black....they are red, black, dark brown and red and black. The rarest are the red ones and I think of them as love bugs, ( not THE love bugs). That's where I got the idea for this from. Yes, they have cool legs in real life...That's kind of made up from a fircula or wishbone ida and tibia bones, but they arent real or anything, just something I thought looked cool :)rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-13491016749129700892011-04-11T15:40:34.000-04:002011-04-11T15:40:34.000-04:00I think I've seen those beetlelike bugs around...I think I've seen those beetlelike bugs around our yard. Are they really red or brown? I thought the legs looked like stiff frog legs. I'm now trying to figure out what bone that is. Very cool though!;~)zonedinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00724115674900988646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-86347973869379175572011-04-11T09:49:37.836-04:002011-04-11T09:49:37.836-04:00yes, I like most bugs but some are kind of scary. ...yes, I like most bugs but some are kind of scary. I had a ladybug kit when I was a kid, I dont know if they sill have them but probably do. The boxelders are real huddle bugs down here and will be all over the in the summer.<br />This was about the boxelders more than the lone ladybug on the sun flower. I put bone legs on them so it is a little hard to see thats what they are in the painting. :)rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-12100940452522483202011-04-11T06:55:58.908-04:002011-04-11T06:55:58.908-04:00I love the "trusting in the dark" part.....I love the "trusting in the dark" part...like the metamorphosis of a ladybug. And have you seen the clusters of ladybugs in a nest? There are thousands of them all huddled together as they embrace the changes that will happen without choice on their part. Then one warm sunny day, they will all fly away to a new home.zonedinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00724115674900988646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-55805250270924387562011-04-10T05:52:59.409-04:002011-04-10T05:52:59.409-04:00juniper,thnx... I have a problem sometimes with th...juniper,thnx... I have a problem sometimes with the ryhmes that are like da de da de da de dum,<br />da da de da da da de DUMB!<br /><br />but it is possible that I have to get it out of m system or something<br /><br />Dead and Anna, thanks for comments. :)rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-42473798334870789232011-04-10T05:19:34.841-04:002011-04-10T05:19:34.841-04:00yesyesyes.
no words to describe the emotions all ...yesyesyes.<br /><br />no words to describe the emotions all this brought out in me. this is perfection.juniperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15086932207768017104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-16791203659419505252011-04-10T03:03:03.458-04:002011-04-10T03:03:03.458-04:00i may need some feeback as to whether this is fini...i may need some feeback as to whether this is finished looking or not, i keep changing it and am seriosly beginning to wonder whats wrong with me , meaning why do i keep changing this ?? really weird...<br />thnx PBB! i wonder if thisever happened to anyone else and why it does ?rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-73866965776293631822011-04-10T02:54:13.007-04:002011-04-10T02:54:13.007-04:00Great piece River. I love the words and the match...Great piece River. I love the words and the matching drawing. It feels so harmonized.Psycho Babbling Basherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17232755958213827818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-27871417573702022392011-04-10T01:19:45.742-04:002011-04-10T01:19:45.742-04:00i love the dragon's eye it makes the whole po...i love the dragon's eye it makes the whole poem work so good. :)dead-girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16016374169786148983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-46957380324503958462011-04-09T20:23:45.222-04:002011-04-09T20:23:45.222-04:00below the skin's unimportance
Love it.below the skin's unimportance <br /><br />Love it.AnnaFullStophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06877463150680401243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-45435877204427814672011-04-09T16:05:16.343-04:002011-04-09T16:05:16.343-04:00I changed the title and a bunch of lines. You guys...I changed the title and a bunch of lines. You guys are really nice and thnx for the comments. I hope I didnt make it worse. Writing them online is the best way for me because it pressures me to try and make my message clearer, but the poem changes a lot in the hour or so I write it THNX!!<br />..and yes, that's a ladybug in the sun :)rivercathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13266676584816215256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-64766464275887820552011-04-09T13:16:37.721-04:002011-04-09T13:16:37.721-04:00now this is special!now this is special!Rubye Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02511953177053448513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-4250765592598610812011-04-09T11:39:34.787-04:002011-04-09T11:39:34.787-04:00so simple, but so full of meaning <3so simple, but so full of meaning <3The Dreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15939036986139021611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-88698011233310230312011-04-09T11:34:21.692-04:002011-04-09T11:34:21.692-04:00This is so beautiful. Is that a ladybug on the cir...This is so beautiful. Is that a ladybug on the circle? I LOVE ladybugs! <3roseanna2uhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12383408623234601664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-52503649872046961282011-04-09T11:01:57.314-04:002011-04-09T11:01:57.314-04:00You make me fall in love.
I wish you a wonderful w...You make me fall in love.<br />I wish you a wonderful weekend.<br /><br /><br />LOVE!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942048085556133313.post-3043000810391944692011-04-09T10:33:45.398-04:002011-04-09T10:33:45.398-04:00Beautiful poem :)Beautiful poem :)Simranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01931908983809822868noreply@blogger.com