time burrows a little deeper under my nailslike the blue in the centre of the fire of now.filling me with only emptinessthe void which swallowed my heart and soulnothing left to sound the bells of freedoms wake
loved the opening line.. filling consciousness with light.. sonic fields of flesh.. awesome metaphors u have used..
Did this come to you in a dream?
hello all, thanks for comments :)No this was not a dream poem. I havent had a pen and paper near my bed lately but thats a good idea in case something did come in a dream :)
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