Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Life stretched into words

nature undressed
of the slosh and polish
spring in my breath

white face letters from
starved earth
easy as eyes closed

let loose from how to
fresh sheets for paradise
to begin anew



Madhulika said...

Beautifully crafted..!!!

Jyoti Mishra said...

u stretched life in some really beautiful words :)

Awesome read !!

Isha Ethera said...

hmm, I like it.. tell me more!

zonedin said...

I tried to comment a few days ago but it didn't stick.

zonedin said...

I forgot what I said but I liked it... something about how this makes me think of spring thaw and new beginnings. I can't explain it in words.

rivercat said...

hi all, thanks :)
yes, the spring in florida is kind of weird so I write as if I was up north again sometimes when I was a kid and there was flowers popping through the snow or huge swings in what you had to have to wear.