Sunday, March 4, 2012

Black Snake

uncoiling in a wake
of deepening silence
a lining left in its place
a history time drew out and

unwinding held back smiles
quietly spreading forward
behind a curiosity


SnowBow said...

I like this one..

Wish you write long poems doll (:

mhairi! said...

Moving in forward motion
Quickly yet it was quiet
In the garden
Secrets hidden from us

Wondered, where you were?

This is silky and smooth. The phrase 'silent and deadly' darts to mind. Poisonous thoughts should ever try and penetrate our minds, yet your poetry provides an antidote. A remedy to the pain of minds.

Take care, I know I haven't been around in forever. Wishing you well, always xxx

Whatever said...

I was hungry for evidence
and to eat whatever patterned shreds left me
to have a piece of your puzzle inside me
because when I awake
you have always escaped
smoothly slithering
free of all the knot's I tied to try and bind you to me.

zonedin said...

I have nothing to say.

Or maybe,

I have a lot to say, but no words to say it.