Thursday, February 16, 2012

Of Course

For now, the words look right
between  the narrow spaces
with ends that follow ends

within a frame climbing,
climbing the invisible walls
as we come to be
aware again

and these waves that hit, hit hard
and we all can feel what's inside
the flow



Simran said...

Liked and agree with your thoughts!
Nice :)

Whatever said...

and then to the left
into the vast voids of meaning left unsaid

untamed silence
whistling straight through the spaces in our souls

heavy deep and dreamy sleep
beneath the ocean the waves roll strong and steady
until I feel everything or nothing at all.

Indigo said...

Beautiful. The writer woven into the tapestry of words. (Hugs)Indigo

Brittany said...

I had to read this twice,
it twists and turns and falls together

zonedin said...

I had to read it a few times and it brings to mind barriers, structure, and the waves that break it down.

Nadya said...

beautifully written!