Saturday, December 17, 2011

Easily and slowly

The wind is placed as a new
resident and the cold gold leaves
rest on each other
December through glass

As the doors open
angel's hands  are buried
in deep sweets and dark secrets
I could hide here and wait forever



Akeith Walters said...

Always good to read your work.

Jyoti Mishra said...

nice metaphors u use.. fantastic read..
I was trying to visualise it :)

Whatever said...

sometimes when I'm quiet and still
the wind whispers in my ear
against my cheek
and sometimes she blows right through me
opening doors to places long forgotten
like those places
where you are hiding and waiting
sweetly and slowly
Is this voice carried on air
or does it stir from deep inside me?

Whatever said...

sometimes the best things I have to say are echos of what I hear here.

Simran said...

Beautifully carved :)

saraht said...

Lovely images. Merry Christmas.

rivercat said...

thanks all for the great comments
hi whatever, iappreciate the thoughtful comments and ha that is funny. sometimes when i post a comment on your blog i think i should post it on my site as a post instead :))

Anonymous said...

Oh, my heart still falls in love with your words.


Peachyyy said...

Very picturesque !
beautiful :)

Jyoti Mishra said...

Merry Christmas to u n to your family... may this b the happiest of all !!

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