Friday, October 28, 2011

If something is

As I rid myself
of title and plot and
all ties to stratification
and commit to my idea
with the simple thought that it feels
like something right between my fingers

I still imagine you
quietly outside all
I've planned
before even a word's
been spoken



mhairi! said...

This is my favourite that you've ever written.

I wish you so well. xxx

Beyond said...

I get nostalgic and think for a while, yes what that feeling was to me... it's heavenly

zonedin said...

I can't imagine letting go of you, especially as I let go of myself.

The Dreamer said...

so simple yet beautiful. lovely as always my dear <3