Thursday, September 29, 2011

moving statues of air

walk with me
For lightning to strike
science doesn't matter

Sparks inside the grey sky
are somewhat distant
from the dissatisfied storm
and lying still, burning
emotion forward
through the air solidity
at the end of space

then staring back at time
counting stars
missing in the sky



Madhulika said...

Loved the thought "staring back at time"

rivercat said...

hi Madhulika, thanks :)

Anonymous said...

This made me smile! :)


Jyoti Mishra said...

Last verse took my heart :)
beautiful !!!

Lettie said...

Love the last verse... wonderful piece! Another treasure, rivercat. ;)

rivercat said...

tywo,jyotiand lettie, thnx for the wonderful comments :)