Monday, August 15, 2011

Reflections On The Outside

It's strange how looking ahead far
enough you see only backwards
and how the same name for now and forever
is the only name that became you

And as that light moves slowly
out into space and
everything disappears I'll be waiting for you
when nothing happens, and I hope
somehow we disappear together


Akeith Walters said...

Another good one,sir.

TheBlogWriter8 said...

"It's strange how looking ahead far
enough you see only backwards"

Aha! The wittiest lines I've read in all day, today! :) Very cool!

rivercat said...

thanks you guys. I am having a hard time writing lately. I also injured my forearm playing the guitar too much and that is frustrating me. I wanted to post some music to the blog but that will have to wait till my arm heals. I cant work out with my right arm either and am going through a mild depression. ther than those minor things though everything is OK :)

Madhulika said...

Loved the line "everything disappears i'll be waiting for you.."
Beautifully written..!!

Jyoti Mishra said...

Fantastically written :)
Hope at the end is what I liked about the post !!

Beyond said...

love it

zonedin said...

I hope your arm gets feeling better. I don't like it when something ails me. I have trouble thinking straight too when I don't feel good.
I love this that you wrote. I think you write really well when your a little bit depressed;~) But I don't want you to be depressed.

Krystal said...

It was beautifully written. The first two lines of the first stanza are very witty! I am also very drawn to the last two lines "when nothing happens, and i hope somehow we disappear together"

You write in a way that reaches to me, which people have not been able to do until now.

Hope that your forearm gets better.

rivercat said...

thanks all:)
my arm is healing. i have other health problems attacing me now and hope i can get them under control.

thnx zoned :)
thnx krystal. that is such a sweet thing to say <3.

muted.massacres said...

is this about yourself or yourself and another person? just curious because it seems it can be read either way. it's very moving. :)