Tuesday, May 31, 2011

Sailing toward the unreachable place




Now I see you sleeping miles away
controlling my dreams...






as the sea washes over me
I feel the caress of each crest touch the shore








* Dearest friend, we are connected undeneath this body of water. I'd love to be with you so much.
Still, I feel you with me, and this is truly wonderful, no matter where I am , no matter where you are.
Reality is very interesting,  as is really being with the someone you love and enjoying the everyday
 or a getaway or even a struggle about some stupid thing. I am learning to leran about myself and  it is very interesting. In any case, nice places are really fun to go to,  even if  you're not there with
the  person you truly love the most! 
* The wifi signal is OK but it logs off if you sit idle here.Cell phone surfing  hasn't invaded this beach area  and no laptops at the tiki bar have been seen so far.I don't even see any earplugs or ipods which is really strange. I think that is a good sign though. People seem to just want to listen to the waves and gulls and the occasional screech  from a child..

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13 comments:

Liz Rice-Sosne said...

I love this because I have felt it.

saraht said...

This feels familiar to me as well. Wonderful.
xo

Jyoti Mishra said...

this is beautiful !!

Arian Tejano said...

Keep awakening her, keep writing poems like this.. until the message reaches that place, that ever unreachable place.

Rena said...

I just spent some time reading your poetry. beautiful work. keep writing

m. said...

this feels right.
xo

Anonymous said...

The exact words to express that feeling! Lovely!

Anonymous said...

This is so sweet, it makes me teary.
I just met the loveliest boy ever. I moved to a different city yesterday. As I left, I wished for nothing but to bring him along. I miss him already.


LOVE!

roseanna2u said...

This is so beautifully written. I love the first part and the sunset is awesome. I wish I was there. I totally lovethe beach and swimming in the ocean! <3

zonedin said...

Wow! It looks like a lovely local vacation you had. I love these simple trips. They hold so much more value than a highly event scheduled trip. The ocean makes me feel so much and seems to dissolve all my woes. Thank you for sharing;~)

rivercat said...

thans raven,sarah, jyoti, margg, terena, marie, roseanna. All your comments make me happy :)Arian, thanks for your inspiration for the title :)
Tywo, that sounds exciting with a touch of heartache. Youve made that city a better place already imo :)
hi zoned, yes, i only live 3 miles from the water but like to stay in a nice place once in awhile and sleep to the waves. I drive home to feed the cats twice a day. They need the diet of one less meal for four days as they are both a little chunky. There are a billion nice places to stay around here but I try to get up at least 5 stories or so for the water and beach view. I love going on a vacation without having a long drive or a plane ride People assume youre from another part of the country and everyone is all smiles and kind hearted on vacations ( usually). Down here you can do this anytime of year except usually january. Its nice not having to drive home from a day at the beach too. Now Ive got that out of my system and can get back to running and working out hopefully as Ive picked up a few pounds from excessive snacking drinking and fatty foods :)

Angel said...

Writer, beautiful...seems i can relate with ! Ain't got nothing higher ,with love all are reachable!

AnnaFullStop said...

Feel it. She is lucky.