Wednesday, April 27, 2011

One Heartbeat Away From Breaking

Demurring
tombs of sadness
acquiesce and ascend
above a robin's fading cry

With benevolence
bent on addiction
chains the carcanet
as the wind chimes play

to a dancy fromage
one heartbeat
away from breaking



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10 comments:

Vicki said...

Rivercat - you have a way with words.

cherie said...

<3 I love this. Beautiful.

rivercat said...

hi vicki, <3 !

rivercat said...

Thnks cherie, I think ill leave it alone then. I was kind of working on it but tend to over edit.
:)

Nicole✗✗ said...

Fantastic! This a great one!

roseanna2u said...

After looking up a few words I truly love this. It seems to me about being sad and thinking you're losing someone whos close. I hope you're OK. <3

Psycho Babbling Basher said...

Now that's creepy, Which poem did you post first?
I just left a comment on the other one. Check it out.

zonedin said...

It's very melancholy..I love it!

Anna Sergi said...

someone bent on addiction is easily taken over by an heartbeat.

rivercat said...

thnks nicoloe and roseanna :)
hi again PBB, I saw that, i have no idea what happened ! :))
Thanks zoned :)
Hi Anna, i hope you are enjoying the Royal Wedding. Yes, my thoughts were to be always a heartbeat away from breaking could me your heart wont ever really break completely...but, since I just thought of that i'm not sure it makes sense, and I wonder if mick jagger is at the wedding somewhere. I havent heard anything about that.