Friday, April 1, 2011

Inside Her Atoms


Time has slowed to serenity
capsulized
opaquely seeing

the fireballs
dance around me
in a new world.







.

23 comments:

Simran said...

Hmm..Dreamland ! :)

saraht said...

Indeed. A radical transformation into a perfection? So beautiful. xox

Ciccia said...

I could never write poetry, yet I took so many poetry classes in university (they were requirements though). I have no creativity at all. But I can make delicious sweets:)) I like your nice way of writing. Following you from Trapani, Sicily!

haze said...

absolutely beautiful! :)

roseanna2u said...

I always love what you write, but when I read this one I swear to God that for a moment I felt I was flying. <3

haze said...

haha, dove, you don't have to be so nice to me all the time... we both know that i look retarded on the photo. haha :) anyways! missed your posts! and i'm sorry, haven't been here for awhile. hope everything's great.

Vicki said...

Beautiful.

Martina said...

touching

Anna Sergi said...

and that gave me goosebumps my gifted friend!

rivercat said...

Simran, Thanks for the nice comment <3
saraht, I think I know what you mean bt I dont want to seem stupid so i'll leave it at that :D
Ciccia, im sure you can write poetry. I started by taking the advice of a blogger last june and starting a journal, something I never did before. Before long I had a couple of them and many scraps of paper, well actually a pile of printed out things. I remember being sure I was an idiot ( which I still may be) but as time went on through a few horrible spells of giving up poetry writing for ever ( that lasted from a day to a week), I finally got a little confidence.If I put some of my early poems up im sure people would run for the hills...its amazing they dont now but even I admit they are better than when I started. OK, im sure anon will come back and insult me if I keep this up so , thanks for commenting and I love sicily <3
roseanna2u, i will answer your email soon I promise. Thx for the nice comment wow!
haze, I wasnt just being nice. I hate photos of myself, but will admit some look better than others. The ones you put up you look pretty in, that's just reality ...deal :)
Vicki, thanks for stopping by. I read on your blog that you have cats. I think they are great therapy and my two cats are like therapists to me :)
Martina, what a nice surprise,and thx for the nice comment. <3
anna Sergi, hi, and thanks,I just realized your blog name and maybe that was in my subconcious
when i thought of the title for this :)

Anna Sergi said...

I noticed that and i appreciate, call me Anna btw!!!

Psycho Babbling Basher said...

I feel a "moving on" here. A little risk thrown at the wind but worth it.

rivercat said...

ok Anna btw :))

pbb, that is a very perceptive interpretation!

zonedin said...

I had a blue-violet fireball dance around me in a dream and it made me giggle. It tickled my heart;~)

rivercat said...

hi zoned, Ive had that happen a lot especially in the summer. Those are just fireflies and were too groggy to remember them buzzing around , landing on our skin and tickling us silly. The next day we think it was a dream but its just fireflies, that's all. ( he said confounded by such uncertainty that he had become defensively certain
about EVERYTHING)
:))

Nicole✗✗ said...

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!! This one makes me smile. : )

zonedin said...

I love how you dreamed that up:~) However my firelight was much bigger than a firefly...I'm almost certain. Sweet dreams♥

The Dreamer said...

This is exquisitely lovely.

Alcina said...

Stunned!!

rivercat said...

Hi nicole, thanks :)
zoned, I'm sure it was a cool dream. I was just kidding around, poking fun at a know it all and severe doubting thomas I ran into yesterday. I hope you didn't mind me doing that with your comment, it had nothing to do with you so I wanted to explain that here. Just me taking out my frustrations ... sorry about that but I tried to make that a little clear but shouldnt have done that I think now... :)
I really like dreams and daydreams too...
(Lyrics from lovin spoonful 'what a day for a daydream')
"I’m blowin’ the day to take a walk in the sun
And fall on my face on somebody's new mowed lawn"


The Dreamer, your site is a dream come true <3

Alcina, Thanks, I love the way you used 'solmnolence' in your last poem, and am on my way back to your blog now :)

SMandL said...

One of your best - few words, a lot of meaning.

zonedin said...

Oh Rivercat, I didn't think it was negative at all. I just wanted to emphasize how big and incredible it was. Even though it happened when I was on the east coast..it happened this past January and there aren't any fireflies in January. But I love fireflies, because I don't ever get to see them in California. So when I go back east I always catch a jar of them to look at for a little while. Chasing them is fun, but having them land on me while sleeping...that would tickle my funny bone;~)

rivercat said...

I lived on long island we called them lightning bugs, I remember how much fun they were as a kid. They are truly MAGICAL BUGS!!!
Somethings just stick with you into adulthood, and fireflies are a big one.
I also think they are amazing as far as the bioluminescenc involved and the use of their chemicals in medicine. :)