Wednesday, March 16, 2011

.........................We Danced In The Burning Sky..............



There was a time
when my heart lay broken
and hidden away in its chest
and my love life lay scattered 
along the frozen tundra of loneliness 

I doubted whether I would ever fall in love again.
But the beauty of life is that we do fall in love again !
and that ultimately we benefit from the experiences of our past
which help us to distinguish the differences between love lust and wanting 
and help us to recognize and answer true love when it calls...




 
When I saw her
my heart melted and caught fire...

 she was beautiful and kind, and I thought I was falling in love...
but I had been in love before and was still unsure of
   what I was truly feeling...

And Then
I felt something like I've never felt before
something  beautiful
reaching out to me
something that transcended the desires of the flesh
and all the things of this world
 something so beautiful
that I opened my soul to embrace whatever it was !


And as our souls
met each other for the first time
we danced
in the burning sky
embraced In each other amidst the fires of eternity
 a new reality of Love
 
more real
than existence itself
and I knew then that my heart
 was hers forever






12 comments:

roseanna2u said...

This is so sweet! and the picture cute too. <3

zonedin said...

I've always felt true love goes deeper than the flesh. This is so lovely!

rivercat said...

Thanks roseanna2u and zonedin! I think so too :)
I think this is the final version but I'm not sure!

Nicole✗✗ said...

Awe, I literally fell in love with this one!! Absolutely beautiful!

The Dreamer said...

Naw <3 This is so beautiful again. Sigh, so much passion.

Diablesse said...

You write very positively, its beautiful and full of hope

JAGDISH BALI said...

Wonderful !

haze said...

"more real than existence itself..."

wow... just wow... :)

dead-girl said...

And as our souls
met each other for the first time
we danced in the burning sky
embraced In each other amidst the fires of eternity
a new reality of Love
more real
than existence itself
and I knew then that my heart
was hers forever


oh, i really think the last part is so perfect of ending for this! Love this poem...

Siddhartha Joshi said...

Very beautifully written, I also believe that love can happen more than once. However, the feeling might not be exactly the same...or the intensity...

rivercat said...

Thanks for all the feedback and comments!
Have nice weekends everyone :)

Anna Sergi said...

oh <3