Saturday, February 26, 2011

I'm Falling

like a million sprinkles
emptied slowly between her fingers



zonedin said...

and you will land on a pink cotton candy pillow. Enjoy the sweetest dream:~)

Whatever said...

spreading like music,
through the void of my imagination
leaking the milky way.

Anonymous said...


Kaleidoscope Girl said...

Sometimes the simpler, the better. More questions. More ambivalence. Infinite possibilities.

rivercat said...

zonedin - that sounds very comfortable :)

whatever - that sounds like it should be the second stanza. beautiful :)

Kaleidoscope - very true and sometimes words are changed to try and make things more clear ( and sometimes it works and sometimes it doesnt :)

Trickie said...

I could just stare at those lines all day.

Brittany H. said...

I agree with Kaleidescope Girl. It's a sweet poem. Thanks for sharing your work.