Thursday, September 16, 2010

The Fragile Darkness of Dawn

A delivered silence
heats new morning
air between turning

the fragile darkness of
dawn otherworldly
inward falling

marks the erosion of
night's sweet song
spectral song loving

as sleeping
dreams lie
with waking
dreams half closed
behind a heart's
breaking daylight


zonedin said...

I really like this! Makes me think of the time between letting go of the beautiful dream being had in the night to awake to a day dream state which is invaded by reality, but still with you.

zonedin said...

Rivercat, Rivercat where did you go?

rivercat said...

hi zonedin,

I cant write anymore it seems but
I can still read amd comment

zonedin said...

Oh I am so sorry! I'm a little stuck right now, but I've got some things I'm working on. Time is my main nemesis... I'll be here when you can.

rivercat said...

Ok, thanks. I am in a black out period.