Thursday, August 12, 2010

Attention

As I remember it
I was alive because
You were the moment
you know
how it feels

11 comments:

Whatever said...

Don't remember it, be it.
I don't know anything, but I feel so much!

rivercat said...

I am alive
you are
the moment
we are how
that feels


maybe this
is gooder :)
but im not sure

zonedin said...

I like that second "gooder" one.

Or

I feel it
You know it
we are the moment
that feels alive!

rivercat said...

i like that
how about you feel it?
is you know it as good you feel it
:)

Whatever said...

We are alive
This is how it feels
In sharing this moment
we become one.

:)

zonedin said...

So are you saying:
I feel it,
you feel it

or

You feel it
You know it

I think feeling it is much better than knowing it..
That's when you are truly sharing the moment;~)

rivercat said...

knowing is kind of more boring
but sometimes my brain doesnt mind a rest
so i attempt to know more iguess :)
i just thought of the song "more than a feeling"
i dont think i want to know the lyrics lol

rivercat said...

i feel that

i feel it
you feel it

would feel better :)

rivercat said...

how about this:

i feel good because you are you
thanks :)

zonedin said...

I do like that last line;~)

Ana Goncalves said...

Precise and appreciative. :)